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Twenty minutes on the book, where it stalled, and how much time you have.
Online · Fiction and memoir
Finish the book
Finish the book
you keep starting.
Weekly pages due to someone who reads them properly. Not a workshop of twenty strangers, and not another course about writing instead of writing.
- 8–16weeks per program
- 48 hfor a pages review
- 8 maxin a workshop
- $0intro call
The programs
Four programs, one weekly word count
Every program has pages due every week. Everything else is in service of that.
Finish a first draft
A weekly word count you can hit on a bad week, and someone expecting the pages on Friday.
See the programStory structure
Why the middle sags and the ending doesn't land — and how to fix both with an outline you'd actually follow.
See the programRevision & editing
A staged revision: big problems first, sentences last, with feedback that tells you what to cut.
See the programSubmitting your work
A query letter that doesn't sound like everyone else's, a synopsis that makes sense, and a realistic submission plan.
See the program
How it works
Pages due, every week
Writers don't need more craft advice. They need a deadline and a reader who tells the truth.
A weekly target
A word count you can hit in your real life, not your ideal one.
You send pages
Every week, on a fixed day, finished or not.
Feedback that's usable
Within 48 hours: what's working, the one thing to fix, and what to write next.
Plans
Pick your level of support
Month to month, cancel anytime. The 20-minute intro call is free.
Writing group
A weekly session with a small group, plus a shared deadline.
$39/ month
- One 90-minute live session each week
- Groups of 8 writers maximum
- Weekly word count tracked together
- Craft topic each session
- Pages workshopped in rotation
Coaching essentials
Your own coach reading your pages every week.
$99/ month
- Personal 8 to 16 week plan
- Up to 3,000 words reviewed each week
- One 45-min session every two weeks
- Structural notes as the draft grows
- Access to all writing groups
Manuscript intensive
For a full revision or getting submission-ready on a deadline.
$199/ month
- One 45-min session each week
- Feedback within 24 hours
- Full manuscript read with written report
- Query and synopsis drafted with you
- Access to all writing groups
Prices in USD. Cancel anytime, no contract.
How we work
A coach, not a publisher
Be careful with anyone in this industry who takes your money: reading fees, contests with entry costs, publishing packages that charge authors. Legitimate agents get paid when you do.
Lumivoo sells coaching only. We don't publish, don't represent, don't submit on your behalf and take nothing from any deal you make. You keep every right to your work, and we say plainly when a manuscript isn't ready.
Frequently asked
The questions we get most
Do you help me get published?
We help you make the book better and prepare materials. We are not an agent or publisher, we submit nothing for you, and nobody can promise publication.
Do you read the whole manuscript?
In the Manuscript intensive, yes, with a written report. In other plans we read the pages you send each week — usually up to 3,000 words.
What genres do you work with?
Most fiction and memoir. If your project is far outside what we can usefully judge, we'll say so on the intro call rather than take your money.
Will you write or rewrite it for me?
No. We don't ghostwrite. We'll show you what isn't working and how it might be fixed; the words stay yours.
I've never finished anything. Is that hopeless?
It's the most common situation here, and the Finish a first draft program exists exactly for it.
Can I cancel anytime?
Yes. No contract, no minimum term. Access stays open until the end of the month you already paid for.
Where did the book stall?
Twenty minutes on the project and what would get it moving again. Free, and honest.